If there hadn't been so few interesting entries on my f-list yesterday, the rating would probably have stopped me from clicking on this fic. But I suppose there are rather few R/S shippers on lj whom you’ll lose as readers when not paying attention. While reading I was ready to skip something, and before commenting I had to check that I hadn’t missed anything. (I feel it's often taken for granted that young men have hot sex every time – and we have to see it in detail – no matter how tired they are and what the mood of the scene has become.) There is that comment on the next time when Sirius pins him on the bed. But that’s close to the kind of subtle references to sexual intimacy that fits my probably rare taste.

Your name is certainly familiar to me, but I’m not sure if I’ve commented on anything by you before. (I think I must have, though.) Would you like to rec another story of yours which has no explicit sex? As far as I can say, you write really well. There wasn’t much that I found a bit jarring.