“You start moving. When you’re asleep you’re completely still, but when you wake up you start twitching and moving. I’ve noticed.”

Proves it's not gen. I was hardly squinting at all! *cough* Sorry, can't help it, have to slash everything. But yeah, people have claimed R/S from a lot less.

Onto some sort of actual comment...

This fic is an attempt to explain something about why he tugs at my heartstrings and makes my cry like a baby

That is wonderful, because you have a lovely, realistic little Remus right here, and I think he's perfect. This is definitely good prank-angst; quiet and convincing, and I like.x

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