I do like it when Remus is the ultimate desired. He bloody well should be. *is biased also*
You can't help but feel bad for poor old James but he'll get Lily and then Harry and then die, which isn't all bad (but it certainly isn't as good as Remus).
All the descriptions of James' pining were splendid and so evocative.
Oh, and Sirius coming up to Remus all nervous and sweet. Aw. Aren't they just the cutest?

This was wonderful and Remus deserves all the loving he can get.