Wow. Oh wow. Good god woman that was one fucking hell of a BRILLIANT piece. Your writing is amazing and my heart is still clenched and stomped over by a stampede of buffalos and gored by a couple dozen bulls for good measure.
In other words there are big beating hearts dancing in my eyes when I think of your story.
I personally love the length. It makes it feel more raw, more real, and definately much more developed.
I cannot even begin to wax my utter love for your Sirius and Remus in this fic, they are just so beautiful and utterly fucked up.