ext_96028 ([identity profile] nanagose.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wildestranger 2005-10-18 10:20 am (UTC)

This was awesome. The whole story flowed beautifully and was tight and polished. I loved your take on Remus, which I felt was really unique. You really brought out some different aspects of his personality (and sexuality) that are not touched on nearly enough by authors. Usually, promiscuous!Remus irritates me because it seems so OOC (and usually comes off as being written in just for the heck of it); in this story, it works- Remus actually seems *more*... Remus... because of it. Lovely work.

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