Amazing. Absolutely bloody amazing. I could completely relate to Remus throughout the entire story. The denial, the desperation for other outlets, the frustration, the stubbornness, the self-pity, the giving in. Everything was well written and believable. I was pulled in from the first line. You've kept Remus in character even though his actions should be outrageous and unbelievable (but aren't). Great! I've added this to my memories.
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