Date: 2005-06-27 12:26 pm (UTC)
Awwww.... Sirius was so lovely and incoherent, and Remus all cool and calm and yummy and wow! Lurvely fic, all warming.

A few things:

a few inches on pale skin - a few inches OF pale skin?
he had even fancied boys - had EVER fancied boys?
“Sirius?”

“Did you want something?”
- one line, one speaker?
with Remus freckles - with Remus' freckles.

Otherwise, just wonderful, and really funny.
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