Wow. Just simply...wow. I'm completely speechless. That was absolutely amazing writing.
The tension, the emotions, and most of all the pain is so palpable and yet seems to be lurking just under the surface. I love the way you approached this and the way you managed a happy ending without any sorf of fluff at all. I do believe I've been inspired. :)
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Date: 2005-09-13 09:18 am (UTC)The tension, the emotions, and most of all the pain is so palpable and yet seems to be lurking just under the surface. I love the way you approached this and the way you managed a happy ending without any sorf of fluff at all. I do believe I've been inspired. :)
I added this to my memories, too. Bloody amazing.