This may sound odd, but I do mean it as a compliment: I felt like your fic would make a fantastic movie. The imagery throughout was brilliant -- so artistic and so clear -- and each characters' actions and reactions told volumes about them. Very artfully written!
I especially enjoyed the ending of the fic, not only because Remus and Sirius' relationship was resolved happily, but because it brought the story full circle. It made for a very satisfying conclusion.
I hope you don't mind me noting this, but I think I may have noticed a tiny typo. Should 'fell' be 'feel' in the sentence ...Remus wishes he could still throw up, still fell sick...?
In case my sleepy ramblings didn't make it clear, I loved this fic!
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Date: 2005-09-30 10:09 pm (UTC)I especially enjoyed the ending of the fic, not only because Remus and Sirius' relationship was resolved happily, but because it brought the story full circle. It made for a very satisfying conclusion.
I hope you don't mind me noting this, but I think I may have noticed a tiny typo. Should 'fell' be 'feel' in the sentence ...Remus wishes he could still throw up, still fell sick...?
In case my sleepy ramblings didn't make it clear, I loved this fic!