just to spam some more...since I'm bored

[wildestranger]

Just to spam you some more...since I'm bored, what do you think will happen in the next chaper of The Law of Seduction? What scenarios can you imagine? What would you want to see happening?

I'm just curious, as I'm writing it at the moment, and while I know pretty much what will happen, I'm thinking about what kind of questions the previous chapter raised, what would you like to see happen, what would you find satisfying to read? Remember that this is a three part thing, and part has been done so far. So? Anything you want to say, I'll be interested to hear? cause I'm bored and have nothing better to do

Comments

[kabeyk.livejournal.com]

Hmm, lots of hot man-sex? Or is that just wishful thinking...

kxx

[wildestranger.livejournal.com]

Well that much is obvious. Despite what some might say about sex in fics being frivolous...I can't let them not have sex. but the question is...what else? why are they having sex? what does it mean? this is me experimenting with the strange and scary thing called plot...

[tesseract-5.livejournal.com]

hmmm, yeah, it was really on edge at the end of that last part, I'm really unsure of where you're going with it, except for a better understanding of what love and want means to both these boys.

the easy route would be for them to back away from each other in alarm, and misunderstanding, not sure how Sirius can act except to push Remus away. Do you see Remus as retreating or what? I'd to see a twist of something unexpected here, or maybe that's asking too much. :)

[wildestranger.livejournal.com]

I'm not gonna say. But I'd be curious to see how you lot might see it happening. *grins evilly, and winks* I'm sure you can imagine something if you put your mind to it.

[tesseract-5.livejournal.com]

disguises, sure, that's one way to get around the problem, but... you're evil ! taunting us

[wildestranger.livejournal.com]

I'm always evil. Surely you knew this.

But what would you like to see happen?

[tesseract-5.livejournal.com]

motorcycle ride through Glasgow suitable location at night, with the road bumps throwing Remus against Sirius' bum? not sexy, but constant reminder of what the enforced closeness with Black makes him feel ahem.

*smirk* you asked? *innocent look*

[wildestranger.livejournal.com]

That's actually something I hadn't thought of. I can't promise it will find its way to the fic, but it will be somewhere in something.

[tesseract-5.livejournal.com]

*squee* you can combine any latent Larry Mullen Jr. motorcycle fantasies into that image cough.

[wildestranger.livejournal.com]

I DON"T HAVE ANY LARRY MULLEN FANTASIES! WHAT KIND OF A PERSON DO YOU THINK I AM!

For some reason i can't think of members of U2 as sexual. Just doesn't happen. feels like blasphemy.

but motorcycles, on the other hand...

[tesseract-5.livejournal.com]

really? how funny. Bono's still hugely sexy to me, all that leather jacket, scuffy stubble and long hair and earings, even though he's over 40 and married with 4 kids and a lovely wife.

okay, concentrate on just the motorcycles ;)

[kabeyk.livejournal.com]

They're having sex because they are both very pretty boys and therefore it should be compulsory. This is about as far as I usually get with plot, sorry.

kxx

[wildestranger.livejournal.com]

Indeed it should be compulsory. but why are they having sex (apart from our viewing pleasure, of course)? in consideration of all them seduction schemes? Why and how do you think Sirius would try to seduce Remus now? And why and how would Remus seduce Sirius?

[kabeyk.livejournal.com]

I think I already answered the question...

kxx

[tesseract-5.livejournal.com]

ps, OT, but you got a rec of your Lily/Remus/Sirius at a friend's community, (siriusxlily) ;)

[wildestranger.livejournal.com]

Ooh, thanks for letting me know!

[minnow-53.livejournal.com]

They have sex because OMG they are so irresistibly turned on by each other and it's all so hot and they can't NOT have sex. It's not so much a seduction as an incredible meltdown! That's my sort of porn! And as kabeyk says, they're pretty boys so they have sex! What more can you want? If I were a pretty boy -- but we won't go that route.

Okay, you didn't exactly leave it so my suggestion makes sense, but perhaps for later?

^_^xx

[wildestranger.livejournal.com]

*sigh* So everybody just wants sex? Nothing but sex? No conversation, no plot, no seduction?

Oh well.

[minnow-53.livejournal.com]

Well, they can TALK first!

S: Hey, wanna have sex?

R: Sure, why not?

S: Just let me kill these Death Eaters first.

Okay, there you have it: dialogue, plot, seduction. You can add a joke about wands too, if you like.

Mx

[wildestranger.livejournal.com]

Even a joke about wands?

But would you really be happy if I wrote just that?

[minnow-53.livejournal.com]

No! I'm sorry: in the mindset of a very silly fic at the moment, and I was only joking. You mustn't take stuff I say seriously, unless it's a comment on a fic or discussion on canon!

^_^xx