Nice job. I like that they don't rush together immediately. A lot of your imagery and sequencing reminded me forcibly of my own co-written LLAL, "Between the Lines." There's a lot of truth in the idea that Sirius would be difficult to touch, despite past intimacy.
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Date: 2005-09-13 12:47 pm (UTC)