Wow. Amazing. The tension that exists is almost too much. And you sure drew out their longing--I was like "Just touch already!" But it was beautifully written.
He doesn’t though, and Sirius moves away and Remus has his heart attack alone in the kitchen. I almost had a mini-heart attack with this sentence--wow.
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Date: 2005-09-13 05:25 pm (UTC)He doesn’t though, and Sirius moves away and Remus has his heart attack alone in the kitchen. I almost had a mini-heart attack with this sentence--wow.
Awesome writing.