What I like most about it is that the characters aren't OOC. Sirius is still the Sirius hinted at in the books; sure, he's dark, but there was always that edge to him. It's like moving the torch to a different angle so that the shadows each person casts are altered.
And that's about as much poetic critique you're likely to get out of me with the flu. I can say, though, that I really did enjoy this, and I'm glad you're proud of it.
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Date: 2005-10-02 01:59 pm (UTC)And that's about as much poetic critique you're likely to get out of me with the flu. I can say, though, that I really did enjoy this, and I'm glad you're proud of it.