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Drabble, Remus/Sirius, for [livejournal.com profile] txilar.

Remus' head is bent down as he writes, his back taut with the fury of his pen, his hair falling over his brow. A still pose of eagerness that pleases the teachers and they nod with satisfaction at him, seeing nothing in Remus' exposed neck and deft fingers except a good boy.

Sirius sees more.

He watches as a drop of sweat falls down, from the roots of Remus' hair where the pale brown is still a darker root, across the midge-bite that Remus has been stratching all morning and which has now become red and angry with itching, down to the piece of raw skin by his collar where the rough wool of Remus' jumper has brought blood to the surface. Remus twitches under his eyes, irritation raising the tension in his shoulders and making his pen flick exceedingly fast on the parchment.

It takes only a little noise, a breath of a smidgeon of a moan, to make Remus pause. And Sirius stares, with greed and longing, at the sudden flush of release on Remus' cheeks and the slight drop of his eyelids.

Later, they say.

Date: 2006-02-22 05:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] underlucius.livejournal.com
mmmmm

Really delicious and you capture a photographic moment very well.

xxx

Date: 2006-02-24 02:15 pm (UTC)
ext_1798: (coconutswirl/ewan/hands)
From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you so much!

Date: 2006-02-22 06:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] xrated13.livejournal.com
^__^ Very enticing...

Date: 2006-02-24 02:15 pm (UTC)

Date: 2006-02-22 07:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] archon-mentha.livejournal.com
God, that's HOT! Wow.

Date: 2006-02-24 02:16 pm (UTC)
ext_1798: (coconutswirl/johnny/candle)
From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Heh, thank you!

Date: 2006-02-22 08:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fanfic-in-jest.livejournal.com
Hi! This is Sam/[livejournal.com profile] copperbadge in disguise. As a participant in the Remix/Redux this year, the following post may be of interest to you:

http://fanfic-in-jest.livejournal.com/720.html

Thanks!

(ps: Awesome drabble!)

Date: 2006-02-22 09:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tesseract-5.livejournal.com
mmm... lovely description of the midge bite, makes ME itchy grrr

Date: 2006-02-24 02:16 pm (UTC)
ext_1798: (coconutswirl/johnny/frown)
From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Hehee. Thank you!

Date: 2006-02-22 09:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] txilar.livejournal.com
Oooooh, yes. Later indeed.

Oh poor bitten Remus! Gah, it makes me want to scratch my entire back.

the sudden flush of release on Remus' cheeks and the slight drop of his eyelids.

Gyeaaah. *nods* Mmmhm.

Date: 2006-02-24 02:21 pm (UTC)
ext_1798: (anniesj/David Thewlis)
From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Hehee, thank you! I'm glad it worked for you. :)

Date: 2006-02-22 01:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] secondsilk.livejournal.com
O! mmmm.
The details worked in there so smoothly. Tangible.
I want to touch him.

Date: 2006-02-24 02:21 pm (UTC)
ext_1798: (celandineb/cervantes)
From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you!

And don't we all. :)

Date: 2006-02-22 03:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lyras.livejournal.com
Mmmm. Some very nice observations here, and I love the comparison between what the teachers see and what Sirius sees.

Date: 2006-02-24 02:22 pm (UTC)

Date: 2006-02-22 03:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kabeyk.livejournal.com
I likeses.x Hee.

Date: 2006-02-24 02:22 pm (UTC)
ext_1798: (feathered/joaquinhandsface)
From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you precious!

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