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Title: Freckles
Pairing: Remus/Sirius
Rating: R?
Words: 1169
Disclaimer: JK Rowling owns the characters, I have no permission to use tham and I am making no money out of this. No infringement of copyright is intended.
Warning: A bit sappy. And quite suggestive.
Summary: Remus has freckles, Sirius goes mad.
Dedicated to [livejournal.com profile] kabeyk for pointing out the inherent porniness of freckles. Will be crossposted to [livejournal.com profile] remusxsirius and [livejournal.com profile] two_boys

Both characters are over 18 here.


Sirius first noticed Remus’ freckles on the third day of summer. They were lying under a tree, relaxing (Sirius), making funny faces (James and Peter) and reading (Remus), and trying to hide from the oppressive sun. Remus was lying on his stomach, and his shirt had lifted up revealing a few inches of pale skin. The freckles were still light as this point, but as the summer went on, Sirius began to pay more attention to Remus’ back. He noticed that although pale, Remus’ skin didn’t burn easily. Unlike James, who turned beetroot after fifteen minutes and who had to go beg Lily for a special potion, which she only agreed to give after much mockery. Remus developed freckles that began as light brown, but which, under the sun, turned darker just as the skin around them turned a pale golden brown. The freckles formed clusters, and Sirius liked to imagine them becoming words and images. He surreptitiously charmed Remus’ shirt to rise a bit higher every day, and marvelled at the delicious display in front of him.

It was after a week that he realised three things. First, that Remus had a very, very beautiful back. He was slim, but you could see the shape of slight muscles beneath his skin, and the curve of his spine made Sirius want to bite his lip. Second, that he really, really wanted to lick Remus’ freckles. This was perhaps unsurprising, considering his inability to not stare at/ think about/ plan to molest Remus’ freckles at all times of the day. Third, that this meant he fancied his friend who was also a boy. Yet this last revelation didn’t disturb him as much as it perhaps should have. Sirius understood that this was something that might get him called names and despised by his family (he cheered up at the thought), but compared to Remus’ freckles, that meant very little.

He considered just jumping on Remus’ back, and attacking him with his tongue, but Remus might react badly to that, as he didn’t usually like being jumped at. Also, James and Peter were sitting next to them, and Sirius, although one of nature’s exhibitionists at heart, didn’t want an audience for his first time with Remus’ freckles. He could always ask Remus if he had ever fancied boys, and what did he think of Sirius’ licking his back, but something in this approach lacked subtlety, and also gave Remus the option of saying no.

There had to be a cunning plan. Something that would make use of his oft tested but ne’er defeated ingeniousness, and prove to Remus that he was worthy of licking his freckles. And if it made fun of Slytherins, all the better.

: :

Sirius approached the tree with a swagger in his step. He had considered and abandoned many plans, but the final result was all the more splendid, removing James and Peter, placing the blame on Snape, breaking eleven different school rules, and proving to Remus his skills with his tongue. So when Sirius arrived at the tree, he was understandably disappointed to see no James, no Peter, no Snape or anybody else in sight. But then he noticed Remus, lying on his back, belly exposed to the sun, face hidden by a book, and was lost to coherent thought.

There were freckles on his stomach, light freckles by his navel (Sirius immediately thought of new things to do with his tongue), darker freckles by his hipbone, where his trousers had slid down and exposed the skin to sun and Sirius. There were strands of light brown hair, disappearing in a trail to where the slightest sliver of boxers could be seen.

Sirius had to get closer. He looked around, dropped on his knees, and started moving in what he thought was a stealthy fashion towards Remus. He stopped at two feet away, lowered his head, and inhaled the smell of sun and Remus, sun on Remus, and felt dizzy. Just as he was about to lick the first freckle (one at a light distance from Remus’ navel, it wouldn’t do to start too high), he heard a voice speak:

“What are you doing, Padfoot?”

There was no good answer to that, when you’re caught on all fours and sniffing your friend’s stomach. Sirius considered transforming into a dog, but then decided that would be the coward’s way. He would stand by his own tongue.

“Um.”

“I see.”

This would have been an uncomfortable silence, if Sirius hadn’t been entranced by Remus’ freckles (they were so close!) again and forgotten all about the conversation they were supposed to be having.

“Sirius?”

Gnergkh.

“Did you want something?”

Finally something he knew the answer to.

“I want to lick your freckles.”

Yet, somehow it didn’t sound so good when spoken out loud.

“I see. Er, why?”

Sirius tore his eyes away from Remus’ stomach, and looked at his face. There were freckles on his nose, on his cheeks, on his chin. Sirius felt light-headed.

“Cause they’re so beautiful you’re so beautiful I want to lick you all over and all your freckles there’s so many of them I want to touch them all.”

Sirius stopped, not because he realised he was talking nonsense (such realisations usually arrived only after repeated bashings on the head by James and Remus), but because Remus was blushing, and his freckles were suddenly swimming in red, and it was the most glorious sight Sirius had ever seen.

“You think I’m beautiful? My freckles?”

If this was the effect it had on Remus then Sirius would never stop saying it. He nodded.

“But I’m not. I mean, I’m a boy, and you’re. Freckles?”

Suddenly Sirius realised what he had to do. That it was the thing he’d wanted to do for a very long time, which only made it sweeter, but this was for Remus, not for him.

“You have the most beautiful freckles I’ve ever seen.”

He whispered the words against Remus’ lips, and many more like it, about what he’d been thinking these past few weeks, about his plans and how he’d wanted to woo Remus, all the things he wanted to do with Remus' freckles and his tongue. He leaned close and stroked Remus’ arms with his fingers, and told him about the little goose bumps that rose when Sirius touched him. He lifted his body over Remus until they were hip to hip and chest to chest, and moaned when his shirt rode up and his bare skin was touching Remus’ stomach. He was careful in his movements, slowly, gradually pressing his leg between Remus’ thighs, and grinding his hips with meticulous care, listening to the noises coming from Remus’ throat. He licked every single one of Remus’ freckles, and when Remus began to tremble and bite his lip, he did it all over again.

It was dark by the time they walked back to the castle, but Sirius had finally understood what to do with Remus’ freckles.
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Date: 2005-06-27 12:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] randomlancila.livejournal.com
*loffs on*

This is fantastic. Freckles. Guh.

*adds to memories*

Date: 2005-06-28 01:53 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2005-06-27 12:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nellie-darlin.livejournal.com
Awwww.... Sirius was so lovely and incoherent, and Remus all cool and calm and yummy and wow! Lurvely fic, all warming.

A few things:

a few inches on pale skin - a few inches OF pale skin?
he had even fancied boys - had EVER fancied boys?
“Sirius?”

“Did you want something?”
- one line, one speaker?
with Remus freckles - with Remus' freckles.

Otherwise, just wonderful, and really funny.

Date: 2005-06-28 01:55 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for pointing out the mistakes, I have corrected.

Date: 2005-06-27 12:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] penguin88.livejournal.com
Mmmm. Perfect and summer-esque and lazy. I am ever so happy. Especially because of this conversation:
“What are you doing, Padfoot?”

There was no good answer to that, when you’re caught on all fours and sniffing your friend’s stomach. Sirius considered transforming into a dog, but then decided that would be the coward’s way. He would stand by his own tongue.

“Um.”

“I see.”

This would have been an uncomfortable silence, if Sirius hadn’t been entranced by Remus’ freckles (they were so close!) again and forgotten all about the conversation they were supposed to be having.


Hahahaha. I do so love awkward Sirius.

and his shirt has lifted up revealing a few inches on pale skin.
Here, I do believe that you meant to say that 'his shirt had lifted up, revealing a few inches of pale skin', instead of 'on pale skin'. Yes, that is a tiny and insignificant typo in the world of typos, but I thought you might like to know.
Fabulous freckle piece.

Date: 2005-06-28 01:56 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. And thanks for pointing out the mistake, I have corrected.

Date: 2005-06-27 12:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] minnow-53.livejournal.com
I'm now seeing freckles everywhere, and thinking of skin... Not a good idea! That was very sweet.

^_^xx

Date: 2005-06-28 01:57 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Heh, I live to spread the freckle perviness...thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2005-06-27 12:41 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] musesfool.livejournal.com
mmm...deliciously summery and sweet, and god, who doesn't want to lick Remus's freckles?

I needed this today. Thank you.

Date: 2005-06-28 01:58 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Indeed. Remus is most lickable.

And thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you are feeling better.

Date: 2005-06-27 12:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] archon-mentha.livejournal.com
This made me laugh out loud, and I'm still grinning like an idiot.

He had considered and abandoned many plans, but the final result was all the more splendid, removing James and Peter, placing the blame on Snape, breaking eleven different school rules, and proving to Remus his skills with his tongue.

Just...Hee!

Thank you for making this a very happy Monday. ^__^

Date: 2005-06-28 02:00 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you. And making people grin like idiots make me grin like an idiot, so...:)

Date: 2005-06-27 12:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_emeraldgreen/
Oh, that was just gorgeous! Exactly what I needed today. I want to lick Remus' back freckles too. So badly. Also, gnergkh is the best sound.

Date: 2005-06-28 02:01 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad it worked for you.

And that's what (Remus') freckles are there for.

Date: 2005-06-27 12:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silanah.livejournal.com
There were freckles on his stomach, light freckles by his navel (Sirius immediately thought of new things to do with his tongue), darker freckles by his hipbone, where his trousers had slid down and exposed the skin to sun and Sirius. There were strands of light brown hair, disappearing in a trail to where the slightest sliver of boxers could be seen.


boytummy and boyhip - my favourite things both in fandom and life.

Lovely, lovely fic. You're writing is wonderful and polished; it's like five minutes respite from all the extraneous crap when I read one of these. I'm so glad you're on my flist; it means I get to read the fics as soon as you post them. :)
N

Date: 2005-06-27 12:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silanah.livejournal.com
I mean 'your', of course.


N

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Date: 2005-06-27 01:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fleshdress.livejournal.com
That was very very lovely. I want to lick your Sirius. If I have energy left, I shall start in on licking Remus' freckles. I'd lick you too, but that would be weird, so I shall simply fangirl you. :)

Date: 2005-06-28 02:09 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
All licking is good, and as [livejournal.com profile] musesfool says, who doesn't want to lick Remus' freckles?

And thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! ;)

Date: 2005-06-27 01:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roz-morgan.livejournal.com
Just yum!

Suddenly freckles have become much, much more attractive.

Date: 2005-06-28 02:09 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it.

Date: 2005-06-27 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shaggydogstail.livejournal.com
Brilliantly sweet and funny. Sirius going doolally over Remus' freckles is a truly beautiful thing.

There was no good answer to that, when you’re caught on all fours and sniffing your friend’s stomach. Sirius considered transforming into a dog, but then decided that would be the coward’s way. He would stand by his own tongue.

Can't stop giggling at this. Very, very happy-making.

Date: 2005-06-28 02:10 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you! I am happy to produce giggling. *g* And I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2005-06-27 03:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kabeyk.livejournal.com
Oh my god: freckles and a cunning plan!

Second, that he really, really wanted to lick Remus’ freckles.

Oh yes!

“Cause they’re so beautiful you’re so beautiful I want to lick you all over and all your freckles there’s so many of them I want to touch them all.”

I'm not perving on you, honest!

Just wonderful, oh god. Much love.x

kxx

Date: 2005-06-28 02:11 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Heh, thank you! I thought you might appreciate this.

And all perviness is good. ;)

Date: 2005-06-27 06:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sopdetly.livejournal.com
YES. FRECKLES.

Remus's freckles are amazing. GUH.

Date: 2005-06-28 02:12 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2005-06-27 10:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blue-moonie.livejournal.com
.....
Oh, Lordy.
*adds to memories*

Date: 2005-06-28 02:12 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2005-06-28 04:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] spessartine.livejournal.com
Mmm, yum.

There were freckles on his stomach, light freckles by his navel (Sirius immediately thought of new things to do with his tongue), darker freckles by his hipbone, where his trousers had slid down and exposed the skin to sun and Sirius.

Oh, thats so hot. I have such a thing for stomachs! Also this:

He looked around, dropped on his knees, and started moving in what he thought was a stealthy fashion towards Remus.

made me giggle madly. Okay, I'll stop quoting you whole fic at you. Lovely!

Date: 2005-06-28 06:19 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Thank yuo so much! I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for a great review.

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Date: 2005-06-28 05:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] celinafairy.livejournal.com
Yay! Freckles!Remus.... yummy.

Date: 2005-06-28 06:20 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Heh, thanks! I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2005-06-28 07:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] javajunkie13.livejournal.com
Oh, this was fantastic. I never really thought I had a freckles fetish until now, but I definitely want to lick Remus' freckles. ;-)

He considered just jumping on Remus’ back, and attacking him with his tongue, but Remus might react badly to that, as he didn’t usually like being jumped at.

Haha! That's such a great line.


Quick note:
which, under the sun, turner darker I think you mean turned instead of turner. :-)

Lovely job! I'm adding this to my memories!

Date: 2005-06-28 08:30 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Heh, thank you! I'm glad to produce new fetishes in people. And thanks for the note, will go and correct.

Date: 2005-06-28 12:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] the5thmarauder.livejournal.com
Ah. Lovely, m'dear. What I wouldn't give to lick Moonys' freckles. *sighs* Still I have your fic to imagine Sirius doing the same thing (which is just as good, really;) )

Date: 2005-06-28 03:12 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. And I have a feeling Remus' freckles are a common interest in this fandom...

Date: 2005-06-28 03:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hphotlips.livejournal.com
Yay for freckles!!! I hope someone loves my freckles the way that Sirius loves Remus's freckles someday! Teh cuteness is loff!

Date: 2005-06-28 03:12 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked. And freckle love is good. :)

Date: 2005-06-28 06:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] westwardlee.livejournal.com
Freckle fetish rocks, you know? I love freckles, too.

This was very cute. Sirius has very good taste.

Date: 2005-06-29 04:18 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. And who doesn't share Sirius' taste...

Date: 2005-06-30 07:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kinky-kneazle.livejournal.com
Guh. All the lines other people have quoted are brilliant, but this one too: He could always ask Remus if he had ever fancied boys, and what did he think of Sirius’ licking his back, but something in this approach lacked subtlety." Left me feeling all warm and gooey before bed. Thank you.

Date: 2005-06-30 08:29 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 2005-07-01 06:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caedesdeo.livejournal.com
I love freckles. I love your Sirius. I love this.

I've also stared at/read the word 'freckles' so many times that it's lost all meaning. Temporarily, but still annoying. I hate it when words become incomprehensible through constant use.

But I still love this.

Date: 2005-07-03 10:09 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Heh. Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

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Date: 2005-07-02 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] inocciduous.livejournal.com
freckles! *dies* i am such a sucker for freckles - you have no idea. i think it's my new kink ... especially after this fic.

which is my very ineloquent way of saying i love this and your writing is absolutely beautiful. *friends*

Date: 2005-07-03 10:10 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you! I' glad you liked it.

Date: 2005-07-03 05:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] earlwyn.livejournal.com
*loffs you and loffs the fic*

Especially...

He stopped at two feet away, lowered his head, and inhaled the smell of sun and Remus, sun on Remus, and felt dizzy.

Now I want to cuddle the sun, if that's possible, and Remus' freckles. Which is probably less possible then sun-cuddling.

*adds to memoires*

Date: 2005-07-03 10:10 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 2005-07-06 07:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] werewolf-dreams.livejournal.com
Amazing. Seriously beautiful.
wow.

Date: 2005-07-07 11:14 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] wildestranger.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.
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